caught you
im practiced:
if i close my eyes just so and i part my lips just right. i can settle into a routine of complex breathing in mock sleeping. perfect for a complex situation. his t-shirt is dampening my forearm. it feels like it did last week, and the week before, for as long as i can remember. when i reached out for your hand and you were too weak to lift me up, i salute you. it was easier to be asleep for you than let you or i wander into our final conclusion. i am too nervous for love. mon coeur, mon amour.
posted by tarajoy at 4/01/2007 02:36:00 PM
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"it was easier to be asleep for you than let you or i wander into our final conclusion." hmmmmmm, provocative. i like the way you phrased that.
thanks! thats the word i want all my writing to do. actually i want anything/everything i do to provoke feelings and to do new things for people.
and another neat thing. it's cool when all of your sentences stand alone (the previous post), like a very long haiku.
its way more fun. but not good in english class.;)
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